After Abstracts (edit)Death departshand in hand with love. Sensing abandonmenttime abdicates.In the cornersof this room —restless memory.I ride my bike north on Weber Street. Afternoon sunwears a tu-tu of clouds —sambas with soul.
"a tu-tu of clouds" How i love that images. Made me smile.
Still good. I am not sure what you took out but there was something more after the tu tu of clouds line. i would like to see the 2 side by side.
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