tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14755455.post1615671805271638195..comments2023-05-07T06:37:16.722-07:00Comments on North of Reality: hwfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06487683110705875482noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14755455.post-8375142297243510532007-07-31T16:20:00.000-07:002007-07-31T16:20:00.000-07:00Hi,Here I am come round again. Thinking of your li...Hi,<BR/><BR/>Here I am come round again. Thinking of your line "one foot placed on concrete the other on a dissolving shoreline." Wow. I'm guessing the dissolving shore is the land you left--but you know, it could be just the opposite-- the permanent land could be the one which gave you your genetic heritage, and the dissolving one the shallow ephemera of the modern society.<BR/><BR/>Whatever--Reading poems and loving being on vacation,<BR/>I am,<BR/>Your friend,<BR/>CarolC.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02001731850927490233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14755455.post-18986272702776350422007-05-28T11:54:00.000-07:002007-05-28T11:54:00.000-07:00You have a lot of interesting poems and pictures h...You have a lot of interesting poems and pictures here. I like this one in particular. The idea of contemplating one's life, one's place in life in general, amid flashing alarms is terrific. It imparts a sense of urgency that makes me feel foolish if I ignore the warnings in my own life. And then the last two lines, especially the word 'calculated,' give the speaker (you:-)) so much power over his own life. I really like it.<BR/><BR/>C. [The other C.]C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02001731850927490233noreply@blogger.com